I have two versions, half-written.
Would anybody mind taking a look at them and see if either A)they're any good and worth continuing and/or B)which one you might like more.
The first version is here. It's in first-person narrative and a very rough draft. There's a tentative beginning and ending written out. I found it difficult narrating in the perspective of a character who's very different from me. I kept losing his voice, so to speak.
The second version is here. It's in third-person, but I found it difficult as well. I lost interest in this one even sooner.